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Thursday, June 3, 2010
公园的描写
太阳公公的阳光照在快乐的草丛上。草和花们都在
笑眯眯
的,给人们新鲜的空气。风在天空呼呼着,让叶子在风中沙沙作响。叶子在树上飘来飘去,很像在荡秋千似的。突然,一阵雷声传了过来,下起了大雨。太阳公公吓得躲了起来,黑云马上飘过来。在花草树木都在‘冲凉’的时候,一条光从天空射出来。原来是闪电!接着,又传来了
轰隆隆
的声音。但那些花和草门都不在意,继续的笑。最后,雨停了下来,就像一个瓶子倒完了水。土壤是非常潮湿,花儿快乐的笑着。白云就慢慢的飘来了蓝色的天空。太阳公公也出来了,带来了暖气。
3 comments:
Daphne Seet
June 3, 2010 at 8:08 PM
你没有highlight那些比喻词!
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Joshua Low
June 3, 2010 at 8:09 PM
我觉得写得很好!
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何老师
June 7, 2010 at 1:34 AM
想象力丰富!
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你没有highlight那些比喻词!
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